Angry

One time that made me really mad was when I was dating this guy named Matt. We weren't even going out for that long probably like 2 weeks at the most. So i broke up with him because he decided to make out with my best friend and lied to me about it. He was telling me all these lies and kept making himself look bad. So my best friend and I decided to do a plan where we went down town together and we were gonna meet up with him. Well that didn't work out the way we planed, but I saw him like 3 hours later down there. So he saw me and her walking holding hands and he gave me the most dirtiest look and we went up to him to talk and he ran away. Now he texts me and keeps on saying I'm sorry and that he wants to get back with me. And now his friend wants to get with me too and I just laughed at him.

Sentence Comblining

*Cole shuddered. Cole had another spasm. He had chills. Rosy shoved Edwin. The shove was light.

Cole shuddered while he had another spasm and Rosy shoved Edwin lightly.

*Cole sipped water.The water was in a glass. She held the glass to his lips. He struggled to swallow the pills.

Cole sipped water in a glass as he held the glass to his lips while he struggled to swallow the pills.

* Cole closed his eyes. Rosy cleaned his wounds. Rosy bandaged his wounds. His wounds were open.

Rosy cleaned and banged Cole's wounds because they were open.

Coles Punishment

For his punishment I wouldn't have done anything different because he needs to be away from people. He needs to find himself and this is the best way to do that.